In the pas, smoking was not a big issue or problem. However,
nowadays smoking has increased in many different ways. There are several causes
and effect of the increase of smoking.
For some people smoking is very important thing in their
life. Because smoking can make them very enjoy and relax when they have many
problems and depress. Cause of smoking not only depress when they have many problems
but also they have a lot of free time and they didn’t know what will they do,
so they decided to smoking. Surrounded by smokers is also became a main cause
of smoking. They are affected by smokers so they become a smokers too.
In the other hand some people who didn’t like smoking said
that smoking have many negative effect for their body. For example cancer, this
is cause in cigarette implied many dangerous substances. Not only that but also
smoking is waste of money. Ussually smokers didn’t have enough time to together
with their family because they are to busy handle their problems. Eventhough some
smokers can died because they are too much smoking.
In conclusion, smoking is a very bad habit. Many people have
died from smoking. This habit must be contained by government to get rid of.
i found some typo.
BalasHapus1. in the pas => it should be "in the past".
2. when they have many problems and depress. => when they have many problems and they feel depressed. [depress is verb and depressed is adjective].
3. Ussually smokers... => usually