ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

CLONING

In this globalization era, there is a lot of technology such as cloning. For some reason cloning is a good technology to breed animals. This technology is used to create animals with cross the DNA from 1 species but different kind. However in fact, many scientists abuse this method to cloning human for reproduction. Whereas when they create human for reproduction its mean that they compete the God’s power as a creator of human and universal. Because of it, cloning human should be banned.

SUMMARY IMPETUS

         Abdul is a moslem man who  are very obey with religion.  He always kind to his neighbor and his wife.  His story began when Abdul woke up and pray subuh. After that he had breakfast and he met with his sister then they talk about seeking knowledge is an obligation on every muslim, male and female. Then he went to work, when he walk he found a neighbor’s newspaper then he gave it to his neighbor. Then, when in the train he met with his friend who was very frustrated because he had many problem. Abdul told to him to be patient and thank to God. After he got off from the train he met a man who looked Abdul with annoying face, but Abdul just smile because smile is a charity.  Then Abdul arrived in his office, he read a newspaper about murdered. Then his friend came, he talked a little with his friend. For a little moment, the phone rang for Abdul friend. It was from their boss, and they were talking about position. Abdul looked furious. Then, when Abdul finished work, Abdul back to his home, he brought some flower for his wife. In the last, at night, Abdul pray again to God. He asked to God to gave him  good health, make me obedient son, loving husband,  good brother, responsibly father, cousin, generous neighbor, excellent employee, productive member of society, make all of my statement and action both of hidden and appearance make of your sight, oh Allah guide me to paradise. 

QUOTATION AND PARAPHRASE IMPETUS

QUOTATION

Be Kind to Neighbor

Sahih Al-Bukhari Hadith 8.44 Narrated by Abdullah Ibn Umar

Allah' Messenger (saws) said, "Jibrael (a.s.) kept on recommending me about treating the neighbors in a kind and polite manner, so much so that I thought that he would order (me) to make them (my) heirs!"

http://www.islamhelpline.com/node/7478

Smiling is Charity

The Prophet Muhammad (peace is upon him) said: "Charity is prescribed for each descendant of Adam every day the sun raises." He was then asked: "From what do we give charity every day?" The Prophet answered: "The doors of goodness are many...enjoining good, forbidding evil, removing harm from the road, listening to the deaf, leading the blind, guiding one to the object of his need, hurrying with the strength of one's legs to one in sorrow who is asking for help, and supporting the feeble with the strength of one's arms--all of these are charity prescribed for you." He also said: "Your smile for your brother is charity." - Fiqh-us-Sunnah, Volume 3, Number 98

http://www.islamawareness.net/Hadith/htopic_charity.html

Treat Woman Kindly

Abu Huraira reported: The Messenger of Allah, peace and blessings be upon him, said, “Treat women well, for woman is created from a rib and the most curved portion of the rib is its upper portion. If you try to straighten it, it will break, but if you leave it as it is, it will remain curved; so treat women with kindness.”

Source: Sahih Bukhari 3153

Grade: Sahih (authentic) according to Al-Bukhari

عَنْ أَبِي هُرَيْرَةَ رضى الله عنه قَالَ قَالَ رَسُولُ اللَّهِ صلى الله عليه وسلم اسْتَوْصُوا بِالنِّسَاءِ فَإِنَّ الْمَرْأَةَ خُلِقَتْ مِنْ ضِلَعٍ وَإِنَّ أَعْوَجَ شَىْءٍ فِي الضِّلَعِ أَعْلاَهُ فَإِنْ ذَهَبْتَ تُقِيمُهُ كَسَرْتَهُ وَإِنْ تَرَكْتَهُ لَمْ يَزَلْ أَعْوَجَ فَاسْتَوْصُوا بِالنِّسَاءِ

3153 صحيح البخاري كِتَاب أَحَادِيثِ الْأَنْبِيَاءِ لولا بنو إسرائيل لم يخنز اللحم

http://www.dailyhadithonline.com/2011/03/10/allah-created-women-different-from-men-so-respect-these-differences-and-be-kind-to-them/

PARAPHRASE

1. We must generous with other people around us because Allah SWT said that we must treat people around us politely and kindly.

2. We must be a good person by giving smile with other people who meet us.
3. We must generous and polite to woman because in hadith said that we must treat woman well,because woman created from a rib and the most curved portion of the rib is its upper position. so we must treat woman kindly.

SMOKING

       In the pas, smoking was not a big issue or problem. However, nowadays smoking has increased in many different ways. There are several causes and effect of the increase of smoking.

     For some people smoking is very important thing in their life. Because smoking can make them very enjoy and relax when they have many problems and depress. Cause of smoking not only depress when they have many problems but also they have a lot of free time and they didn’t know what will they do, so they decided to smoking. Surrounded by smokers is also became a main cause of smoking. They are affected by smokers so they become a smokers too.

      In the other hand some people who didn’t like smoking said that smoking have many negative effect for their body. For example cancer, this is cause in cigarette implied many dangerous substances. Not only that but also smoking is waste of money. Ussually smokers didn’t have enough time to together with their family because they are to busy handle their problems. Eventhough some smokers can died because they are too much smoking.

    In conclusion, smoking is a very bad habit. Many people have died from smoking. This habit must be contained by government to get rid of.

MAN CRYING IN PUBLIC

          Have you ever heard man crying in public??

Crying in identical with woman. Man never cry,  moreover in public. Even when they have complicated problem. Because man is stronger than woman. If man crying, its mean that they couldn’t stand anymore with their problem. Man crying depend on their problems. When it is a personal problem they try to be strong. For example, when his mother or father died they will cry. According to my friend Ichsan, he said that when a man got break up from his girlfriend, he will cry in front of the girl to make her trust with him and they are didn’t break up. But i think, Ichsan’s argument is not gentlemen, because seem like no more girl in the world. Man more gentlemen when he can hold on his tears in public. But, if his problem is very complicated and he can bear it, maybe he will cry, but not in public. He will cry in his room or he will look for quite place to cry. So, the conclusion is crying is for woman and for man crying in public is not forbid but it is not gentlemen. 

ONE FIND SPRING DAY

2008 at Incheon Airport
"Oppa, where are you go?"
"I must go to England, Hyemi."
"You mean you'll leave me?"
"Yes, Hyemi. Sorry."
"But why Oppa, why you leave me?"
"I can't tell you now Hyemi, someday when we met again I will tell you."
"Andwae oppa, don't leave me...take me with you oppa."
"I can't Hyemi, please don't cry. Good bye Hyemi."

2013 at Seoul
"Minho oppa...how areyou now?I miss you so much. 5 years you leave me and you never called me. You know oppa, now I worked in restaurant and I always went to place when the first time we meet."said me with looking his photo.
"Hyemi-ah...."called Eun Jae who run to me
"What's wrong Eun Jae"ask me
"Bos called you, he looks very angry."said her
"What??Angry?Oh My God..I'm forget to buy him a cup of cappucino."said me panic
Then I run back to inside restaurant as fast as I can and ready to listen my Bos nagged.


to be continued....

TRANSITIONAL SIGNAL

Transition signals are used to join sentences, idea groups and paragraphs together.

Transition signals

Word Functions	Words	Example Sentences
Adding information	in addition moreover furthermore besides in fact also	The authors are critical of the illusions many organisations have of teamwork. In addition, they suggest that there are some common misunderstandings about 'how' teams actually work. The authors are critical of the illusions many organisations have of teamwork. Moreover, these illusions lead to the use of teams in situations that fail to utilise their potential. The authors are critical of the illusions many organisations have of teamwork.Furthermore, they suggest that these illusions are costing businesses large losses in productivity. The author makes some insightful translations, besidescapturing the poetic tone of the original piece. Long term memory stores vast quantities of information; in fact it is regarded as the source of our intellectual prowess. The author's translation is insightful, also capturing the poetic tone of the original piece.
Contrasting information	on the other hand in contrast nevertheless however on the contrary despite by comparison	The author's translation is insightful; on the other hand it fails to capture the poetic tone of the original piece. Long term memory stores vast quantities of information; in contrast the storage capacity of working memory is much more limited. The author's translation is insightful; nevertheless the piece sounds at its most poetic in the original Spanish. Long term memory has a vast storage capacity; however the storage capacity of working memory is more limited. Smith is critical of the overuse of teamwork in large organisations. On the contrary, Ferguson suggests productivity would be improved if they were further utilised. The Reserve Bank's long term view of economic activity is grim despite the current healthy outlook of many economic indicators. The dramatic staging of the play enhanced the suspense of the piece; by comparison the original version was much less sinister.
Comparing information	similarly also	The Reserve Bank's long term view of economic activity is grim. Similarly many economic indicators forecast a drop in current activity. The author has made an insightful translation. Also, she has captured the poetic tone of the original piece.
Ordering information by time	after that before that then at first since then firstly secondly next lastly eventually gradually finally	Trade opened between Japan and Europe; after that artists were exposed to Asian culture for the first time. Trade opened between Japan and Europe. Before that artists had had little exposure to Asian culture. Trade opened between Japan and Europe; then the art world began to acknowledge this new partnership. Trade opened between Japan and Europe. At first, the art world did little to acknowledge this new partnership. Trade opened between Japan and Europe; since then, the art world has done much to acknowledge this new partnership. Firstly, trade opened between Japan and Europe; secondly, trade between China and Japan resumed. Trade opened between Japan and Europe. Next, trade between China and Japan resumed; lastly, Japan sought to dismantle trade embargoes with the United States. After the trade embargoes were abolished, eventuallyboth parties realised the benefits of a trade partnership. After the trade embargoes were abolished, gradually trade between Japan and Europe increased. After the trade embargoes were abolished, finally both parties could capitalise upon their trade partnership.
Result/ causation	as a result as a consequence consequently therefore thus hence accordingly	Smith fails to provide evidence for her argument: as a resultthis text is flawed. The subjects were not randomly distributed to groups;as a consequence the conclusion they have drawn is flawed. No control group was included in the experiment:consequently, the conclusion they have drawn is invalid. Smith fails to provide evidence for her argument; therefore, it is hardly convincing. No control group was included in the experiment; thus, the conclusion drawn is rather ambiguous. Smith fails to provide evidence for her argument; hence, her opinion has been widely criticised. The subjects were not randomly distributed to groups.Accordingly, the implications of the conclusion are limited.
Conditional	otherwise indeed	Smith tends to use emotive language, otherwise, her case is well argued. Smith tends to use emotive language, indeed, this makes her case highly persuasive.
Concluding	in conclusion in summary finally	In conclusion, teamwork has increasingly become the business strategy of the nineties. In summary, the dietary needs of patients are important and should be the domain for trained nurses. Finally, each of the memory systems operates in tandem to allow learning and cognition to occur.
Exemplifying information	for example for instance	There are a number of users of this type of accounting information; for example, trade unions and their members. The chef required many ingredients to prepare her banquet; for instance, fresh herbs and many types of mushrooms.

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